Wednesday 1 August 2018

My Slam Poem

We have been doing slam poems they are about your personal feelings and something you feel emotionally. take a look hope you like it.
Hope


Hope is one of the best elements you can have in life along with forgiveness and empathy

Hope can bring you lots of highs and lows

When I hope for something and it comes to me I start to  glow

Its comes with love and hope

Hope is one of the things I depend on all the time

But then when my hope is ripped apart I need to get put back in to line

My heart and my stomach drop and I feel so sore

Then I think upon the shores

Hope can be my best friend and fills my inner soul

Sometimes you need to let it out so you can fight the light

When I have a smile on my dile  That mean I have hope

Sometimes  hope is to hard for me  to cope with it

When I am grumpy I mope

Sometimes when I am angry I  lose hope

When  I want to say something and I have hope

But then I don’t

When I have hope some won't

Sometimes I need a boost of hope in my blood

It feels like there is a flood

When there is a flood in my blood I have hope

2 comments:

  1. Hi Morgan,
    My name is Reitu and I am a year 8 in Te Ngahere at Paihia School. I really like your slam poem. I like how you have chosen hope as your subject to describe. It is a pretty long poem for just one word. I love the bit where you have put ‘Hope is one of the best elements you can have in life along with forgiveness and empathy’
    How did you come up with hope?

    Thanks for posting,
    Reitu

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  2. Hi Reitu I cam up with hope because I have hope all the time and I depend on it sometimes thank you for your comment
    Morgan

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Thank-you for your positive, helpful, thoughtful comment.