Friday 12 April 2019

Girls Day At School

Girls Day At school It Was So Fun



Girls Day at School so at school their has been drama with nine girls.so went some were and talked about how we felt and most of us got very emotional and  then we sorted it out and now we are all friend and we get on really good now then we had a girls day so we could do each others nails and hair. Then after that we were all friends.


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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 14:26

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 14:30

    Hi Morgan,

    My name is Sateki, I am from St Pius X School. I want to just say to please re-read and check your work. I found a few mistakes and it had no commas and full-stops until the end. Just from that keep up the good work.
    Good Job!!!

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  3. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 14:31

    Hi Morgan,
    My name is Jerome and I am from St Pius X catholic school, I think that it would be fun to just have you and your friends at school with you.You should re-read your writing and add more punctuation but aside from that good work.

    Jerome

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  4. Anonymous7 June 2019 at 12:02

    Hi Morgan ,
    You all look like you all had a lot of fun.
    I would love to have something like this one day at school.

    Good job

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  5. Unknown31 July 2019 at 14:05

    hi Morgan
    Emily here I am from Blaketown school and i like your girls day pictures of your friends and your got some mistakes need to fix sos
    keep up on the good work bye

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